ext_15384 ([identity profile] philips.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] mere_ubu 2008-07-07 08:10 pm (UTC)

More William? Yes!!!

I've always wondered what baby fish are called. Fry supposedly. And burning baby fry does sound so very wrong. Go Dru!

Childlike beauty’s gaze
bores through drab woolen armor,
bares the poet’s heart.


Beautiful. Exactly that.

Pale eyes mesmerize,
comprehend his entirety . . .
beckon him homeward.


Got the underlying emotion perfect here. *applauds*

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